Friday, 1 April 2011

Our Iron Man Poem

This week Year 3W made a poem about the Iron Man. We all worked together and everybody has contributed to our finished poem. Iron Man

The Iron Man strolled to the rusty junk yard as his eyes went blue like he had a flu.


The Iron Man thinks oil is better than water we are all wondering does he have a daughter?


The Iron Man is like a giant bin that eats like a beast.


We can see a big pile of junk laid down like a loaf made out of cars.


He crunches those cars like I would eat my favourite chocolate bar!


He eats metal all night and chews all day.


He eats tyres like they are chocolate chips.


He eats chain like its spaghetti and drinks oil like its tea.


He eats cars like they are oily and crunchy.


He eats kettles like they are pistachio nuts.


He won’t charge you a buck to eat your truck.


Every time I blink more metal goes dink as he eats even the kitchen sink.


Clink, clink, clink!

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